Sunday, December 04, 2011

...away from home


You don't see;
The beauty in sun rise,that showers hope 
And calmness in sun set, that ushers peace
For you are 
Far away from  home.

You don't hear;
The songs with phrases, that echos happiness 
The voice in song , that spreads love
For you are
Far away from home.

You don't feel;
The sensation in touch, that  awake  you
The power in blessing, that you pray
For you are
Far away from home

You don't breath;
The air in plenty, that sigh's you
The pureness in it, that cleanse you
For you are
Far away from home.




13 comments:

  1. Yup being away from home is something natural that we fell sad..

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  2. wonderful poem..brother,,,,:)

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  3. thank u bro.....trying hard to write 1..lol

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  4. Nice one bro. keep going.

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  5. thank you ....hope i can keep it going..lol

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  6. If there's a heaven upon the earth, a fellow knows it when He's been away from home a week, and then gets back again. be happy and get back with a goal....

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  7. Its really an interesting piece. Away from home and that to in a foreign soil always gives a sigh of pain. Keep posting.

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  8. Wangyel,

    your Poem sound very thoughtful.

    Welcome to blogging world. Keep writing and one day you will realize why your dream......

    Kuenzang

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  9. ok Acho..will do that..thank you for those sweet words!!

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  10. hey Bro,
    wen u r away frm home it doesn't mean u r not counted, u r away from home to learn something new...so cheer mae...

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  11. sure......no matter what, i'm always cheerful ..

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  12. Zaii Pema,
    Interesting one.....Glad to be a CUPID of such a great poet mey oai..Surely ur cupid gonna shoot her arrow....hehehe.......keep posting la....

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  13. thank you my dear cupid!..hehe...looking forward to see your with a hit target..hhehe

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