You don't see;
The beauty in sun rise,that showers hope
And calmness in sun set, that ushers peace
For you are
Far away from home.
You don't hear;
The songs with phrases, that echos happiness
The voice in song , that spreads love
For you are
Far away from home.
You don't feel;
The sensation in touch, that awake you
The power in blessing, that you pray
For you are
Far away from home
You don't breath;
The air in plenty, that sigh's you
The pureness in it, that cleanse you
For you are
Far away from home.
Yup being away from home is something natural that we fell sad..
ReplyDeletewonderful poem..brother,,,,:)
ReplyDeletethank u bro.....trying hard to write 1..lol
ReplyDeleteNice one bro. keep going.
ReplyDeletethank you ....hope i can keep it going..lol
ReplyDeleteIf there's a heaven upon the earth, a fellow knows it when He's been away from home a week, and then gets back again. be happy and get back with a goal....
ReplyDeleteIts really an interesting piece. Away from home and that to in a foreign soil always gives a sigh of pain. Keep posting.
ReplyDeleteWangyel,
ReplyDeleteyour Poem sound very thoughtful.
Welcome to blogging world. Keep writing and one day you will realize why your dream......
Kuenzang
ok Acho..will do that..thank you for those sweet words!!
ReplyDeletehey Bro,
ReplyDeletewen u r away frm home it doesn't mean u r not counted, u r away from home to learn something new...so cheer mae...
sure......no matter what, i'm always cheerful ..
ReplyDeleteZaii Pema,
ReplyDeleteInteresting one.....Glad to be a CUPID of such a great poet mey oai..Surely ur cupid gonna shoot her arrow....hehehe.......keep posting la....
thank you my dear cupid!..hehe...looking forward to see your with a hit target..hhehe
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